writing with Marcus Hazelberg and discussions on the eccentricities of life

9:46pm
she says
I feel like i'm writing complete bullshit!"
yesss

pfff thats nothing
If you're writing complete bullshit
then you're doing something right

i know but we only have 3 essays a quarter

What is the topic

jackie says thank you, that makes her feel better about herself

/what sources are you supposed to work from

shes writing about
she doesn't know lol
shes writing abour revolutionary movements during the 1840s and 1860s

sounds easy enough
the thesis can be always be wrong
Just say like "They had a huge impact on blank"

im telling her this
she says she doesn't have a thesis

and then three pages of citing stuff with some bogus analysis
and then conclusion: "They didn't have an impact on blank after all"

shesl aughing good job
im tryijgn to tell her what to write but its not doing very well

How many movements were there
Main ones, a bunch, interrelated ones?

there were 2 sort of rival ones, but it's not claer cut
and then 2 decades later came new weirder progresive ones
but you're right the first two rival ones didn't DO anything
they just had ideas

Okay so either talk about how one set the stage for the other
or how the second was in opposition to the first
or how the second tried where the first failed
And just have a page on one, a page on the other, and a page about attitudes in russia at the time
In CONCLUSION THEY WERE VERY DIFFERENT
bada bing

hahhaa
i'm breaking it down
she says a lot of smart stuf but not writing that smart stuff down

it's all about outlining
write in this order
1. vague summary of what your thesis will be about
2. list out each body paragraph
3. write body paragraphs in easiest/fastest order
4. bullshit the conclusion
5. summariaze everything you're "going to do" (aka already did) in the intro paragraph

yep
that's really good

It always helps to start the paper with "Since the beginning of time,"
Since the beginning of modern Russian history, political factions have sought to expand their levels of influence in urban centers

that's pretty close to it
she's impressed with how you think about this shit
i'm writing about political reforms from alexander II
and how thye were only subpar

I've been doing this kind of stuff for eight years

some were good, the big important one was shitty though
she says its just hard for her to "focus all at once"
aka women are dumb

looool
play nice

maybe a break is in order
she's in the fetal position
well, typing